Re: [PATCH] Trim descriptions of projects on the propaganda page

--On Friday, March 11, 2005 5:20 AM +0100 "Øyvind A. Holm" <sunny@sunbase.org>
wrote:

> This is my suggestion on trimmimng down the descriptions of projects on
> the propaganda page, so there is room for more. :) In the spirit of one
> change per commit, I attach two patches ? one with only the text
> changes, the other removes the empty line after the header line of every
> entry, which I think groups the entries better.

Looks mostly fine to me.

A comment with respect to the apache.org entry. 'The' is part of the official
name and needs to be capitalized. And, I'm also not sure that I'm a fan of
the replaced entry: we're actually increasing the amount of words here
(14->20). The current entry that we have comes straight from the first
sentence on www.apache.org, so my preference is for that as length isn't an
issue for this description.

And, I believe that the 'OS New' entry at the bottom should be 'OS News'.

Fear not, I can fix this all up once you commit. =) -- justin

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Received on Fri Mar 11 06:55:01 2005