Re: [PATCH] Trim descriptions of projects on the propaganda page

On 2005-03-10 21:53:48 Justin Erenkrantz wrote:
> On Friday, March 11, 2005 5:20 AM +0100 "Øyvind A. Holm"
> <sunny@sunbase.org> wrote:
> > This is my suggestion on trimmimng down the descriptions of projects
> > on the propaganda page, so there is room for more. :)
>
> Looks mostly fine to me.
>
> A comment with respect to the apache.org entry. 'The' is part of the
> official name and needs to be capitalized.

That's fixed.

> And, I'm also not sure that I'm a fan of the replaced entry: we're
> actually increasing the amount of words here (14->20). The current
> entry that we have comes straight from the first sentence on
> www.apache.org, so my preference is for that as length isn't an issue
> for this description.

Yes, the reason I changed it was to associate ASF with the Apache HTTPD
server. I used the sentence kfogel suggested in his answer instead of my
version.

> And, I believe that the 'OS New' entry at the bottom should be 'OS
> News'.

Yepp. Also fixed.

-- sunny256

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Received on Fri Mar 11 08:11:12 2005