Re: [PATCH] fix typos/grammar in book (ch05.xml)

On Mon, Dec 01, 2003 at 05:33:01PM +0000, Julian Foad wrote:
> >@@ -2133,7 +2134,7 @@
> > <para>Sometimes you don't need to run such a tight ship. The
> > repository at <systemitem
> > class="url">http://svn.collab.net/repos/svn</systemitem>
> >- which holds the Subversion source code, for example, allows
> >+ that holds the Subversion source code, for example, allows
>
> In this case the meaning is not restrictive. We are talking about _the_
> only repository at that address, which does hold the Subversion source
> code, so "which" was correct. Perhaps it should have a comma before
> "which" to make it clearer.
>

Even then, the sentence is a bit unwieldy. Perhaps:

... For example, Subversion's own source code repository at
http://svn.collab.net/repos/svn/ allows ...

--ben

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Received on Mon Dec 1 18:45:44 2003