[PATCH]: Book fixes

Fix various grammar, typos, and no longer correct things in the book
documentation:

* doc/book/book/ch03.xml : Grammar fix.

* doc/book/book/ch04.xml : Make example match commentary.

* doc/book/book/ch05.xml : Grammar fix.

* doc/book/book/ch07.xml : Grammar fix. Authentication data is no longer
     stored in the .svn/auth working copy directories.

* doc/book/book/ch08.xml : Fix typo on "Revision".
     Take out "+" in example prompt and program response.

Index: doc/book/book/ch03.xml
===================================================================
--- doc/book/book/ch03.xml (revision 5964)
+++ doc/book/book/ch03.xml (working copy)
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@
     <sect2 id="svn-ch-3-sect-4.2">
       <title>Make Changes to Your Working Copy</title>
       
- <para>Now you can to get to work and make changes in your
+ <para>Now you can get to work and make changes in your
         working copy. It's usually most convenient to decide on a
         particular change (or set of changes) to make, such as writing
         a new feature, fixing a bug, etc. The Subversion commands
Index: doc/book/book/ch04.xml
===================================================================
--- doc/book/book/ch04.xml (revision 5964)
+++ doc/book/book/ch04.xml (working copy)
@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@
 $ ls
 ./ ../ my-working-copy/
 
-$ svn copy my-working-copy http://svn.example.com/repos/tags/calc/newtag
+$ svn copy my-working-copy http://svn.example.com/repos/tags/calc/mytag
 
 Committed revision 352.
 </screen>
Index: doc/book/book/ch05.xml
===================================================================
--- doc/book/book/ch05.xml (revision 5964)
+++ doc/book/book/ch05.xml (working copy)
@@ -1914,7 +1914,7 @@
           These items have already been configured with a set of
           permissions that allows them to work with Apache, or more
           appropriately, that allows Apache to work with those files.
- Apache, when used a Subversion server, will also need the
+ Apache, when used as a Subversion server, will also need the
           correct permissions to read and write to your Subversion
           repository.</para>
     
Index: doc/book/book/ch07.xml
===================================================================
--- doc/book/book/ch07.xml (revision 5964)
+++ doc/book/book/ch07.xml (working copy)
@@ -826,8 +826,8 @@
       that library, and found inside the library directories
       themselves) differ from this naming scheme in that instead of a
       single underscore after the library code, they use a double
- underscore (<literal>"__"</literal>). Functions private a given
- source file have no special prefixing, and are declared
+ underscore (<literal>"__"</literal>). Functions that are private
+ to a given source file have no special prefixing, and are declared
       <literal>static</literal>. Of course, a compiler isn't
       interested in these naming conventions, but they definitely help
       to clarify the scope of a given function or datatype.</para>
@@ -1116,9 +1116,6 @@
           and basically serves the purposes of CVS's
           <filename>Entries</filename>, <filename>Root</filename>, and
           <filename>Repository</filename> files combined.
- Authentication data is also stored within
- <filename>.svn</filename>, rather than in a single
- .cvspass-like file.</para>
 
       </sidebar>
 
@@ -1254,21 +1251,6 @@
         values.</para>
 
     </sect2>
-
- <!-- ***************************************************************** -->
- <sect2 id="svn-ch-7-sect-3.3">
- <title>The Authentication Area</title>
-
- <para>We will wrap up our peek at the working copy internals by
- noting the <filename>.svn/auth</filename> directory. Here is
- where Subversion stores a cache of various data used when
- authenticating against a server that requires such.
- Subversion uses OS-level permissioning to secure the contents
- of these files, but also gives users the option of disabling
- this cache altogether (via a per-use command-line argument, or
- more conveniently via the user's configuration files).</para>
-
- </sect2>
   </sect1>
 
   <!-- ******************************************************************* -->
Index: doc/book/book/ch08.xml
===================================================================
--- doc/book/book/ch08.xml (revision 5964)
+++ doc/book/book/ch08.xml (working copy)
@@ -1466,7 +1466,7 @@
 $ svn info vendors
 Path: trunk
 Url: http://svn.red-bean.com/repos/test/vendors
-bRevision: 19
+Revision: 19
 Node Kind: directory
 Schedule: normal
 Last Changed Author: harry
@@ -1888,9 +1888,9 @@
           <para>To merge changes to a single file:</para>
 
           <screen>
-+$ cd myproj
-+$ svn merge -r 30:31 thhgttg.txt
-+U thhgttg.txt
+$ cd myproj
+$ svn merge -r 30:31 thhgttg.txt
+U thhgttg.txt
           </screen>
 
           </refsect1>

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