David Summers <david@summersoft.fay.ar.us> writes:
> Please let me know if more changes need to be made or if something doesn't
> make sense.
Looks good.
-K
> On 24 Jan 2002, Karl Fogel wrote:
>
> > Date: 24 Jan 2002 20:10:14 -0600
> > From: Karl Fogel <kfogel@newton.ch.collab.net>
> > Reply-To: "kfogel@collab.net" <kfogel@collab.net>
> > To: David Summers <david@summersoft.fay.ar.us>
> > Cc: "dev@subversion.tigris.org" <dev@subversion.tigris.org>
> > Subject: Re: INSTALL: Added RPM info.
> >
> > David Summers <david@summersoft.fay.ar.us> writes:
> > > I just added the RPM info to the INSTALL document (rev 1051). Please
> > > glance over it and let me know of anything that could be better.
> >
> > One of the problems is quite minor:
> >
> > Inside section III, subsections A and B do not line up perfectly. You
> > may laugh, but some of us depend on vertical editor motion to find the
> > next same-precedence section quickly. [Whups! Apologies, I just
> > looked at the diff, and this problem existed before your change. But
> > as long as you're going to fix the problems below, maybe you can take
> > care of this misalignment too?]
> >
> > The other problems are more serious:
> >
> > Subsection III.B has a wrong title. III.A already talked about
> > building Subversion from a tarball, so III.B should talk about
> > building from source. Which it does, except for the subsection
> > title. :-)
> >
> > III.B.1's title is "BUILDING FROM SOURCE TARBALL", but the content is
> > about building from a working copy.
> >
> > III.B.2's title, "BUILDING FROM SOURCE RPM" is accurate, but...
> >
> > III.B.3's title, "BUILDING FROM SUBVERSION WORKING COPY" is wrong --
> > the content there is about how to build an RPM pkg, not about building
> > Subversion from a working copy (this title belonged on section
> > III.B.1). Instructions on how to generate an RPM do not belong in the
> > INSTALL file at all, but in subversion/packages/rpm/README.
> >
> > Can you reorganize things, please? I think a user would get pretty
> > confused right now. :-)
> >
> > Thanks,
> > -K
> >
>
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