Done, rev 1053.
Please let me know if more changes need to be made or if something doesn't
- David Summers
On 24 Jan 2002, Karl Fogel wrote:
> Date: 24 Jan 2002 20:10:14 -0600
> From: Karl Fogel <email@example.com>
> Reply-To: "firstname.lastname@example.org" <email@example.com>
> To: David Summers <firstname.lastname@example.org>
> Cc: "email@example.com" <firstname.lastname@example.org>
> Subject: Re: INSTALL: Added RPM info.
> David Summers <email@example.com> writes:
> > I just added the RPM info to the INSTALL document (rev 1051). Please
> > glance over it and let me know of anything that could be better.
> One of the problems is quite minor:
> Inside section III, subsections A and B do not line up perfectly. You
> may laugh, but some of us depend on vertical editor motion to find the
> next same-precedence section quickly. [Whups! Apologies, I just
> looked at the diff, and this problem existed before your change. But
> as long as you're going to fix the problems below, maybe you can take
> care of this misalignment too?]
> The other problems are more serious:
> Subsection III.B has a wrong title. III.A already talked about
> building Subversion from a tarball, so III.B should talk about
> building from source. Which it does, except for the subsection
> title. :-)
> III.B.1's title is "BUILDING FROM SOURCE TARBALL", but the content is
> about building from a working copy.
> III.B.2's title, "BUILDING FROM SOURCE RPM" is accurate, but...
> III.B.3's title, "BUILDING FROM SUBVERSION WORKING COPY" is wrong --
> the content there is about how to build an RPM pkg, not about building
> Subversion from a working copy (this title belonged on section
> III.B.1). Instructions on how to generate an RPM do not belong in the
> INSTALL file at all, but in subversion/packages/rpm/README.
> Can you reorganize things, please? I think a user would get pretty
> confused right now. :-)
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