Re: Correction to text on main landing page for TortoiseSVN

2009/5/15 Nick Gilbert <nick_at_x-rm.com>:
> Richard S. Mitchell wrote:
>> The first sentence on the site (tortoisesvn.net/)
>>
>> 'TortoiseSVN is an easy to use SCM / source control software for Microsoft
>> Windows and  MAYBE  the best standalone Subversion client there is.'
>>
>> should read
>>
>> 'TortoiseSVN is an easy to use SCM / source control software for Microsoft
>> Windows and  MAY  BE  the best standalone Subversion client there is.'
>>
>
> It should either be
> "and may be the best standalone Subversion client there is "
> or
> "and possibly the best standalone Subversion client there is."
> or even!:
> "and the best standalone Subversion client there is (maybe!)"
>
> But the existing sentence isn't really grammatically correct.

Changed to option 2. I also (hopefully) improved the flow of the
following paragraph.

Simon

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