I'm continuing to work on the DUG. See patches and images.
/doc/source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug.xml:
(19-21)Removed indentation to eliminate extra whitespace at end of link.
(32)Added intro sentance to "You should have..." list.
/doc/source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug_general.xml:
Changed 'are' to 'is' as 'icon overlays' (the feature) is singluar.
From The American Heritage Book of English Usage
http://www.bartleby.com/64/C001/043.html
"Note also that when the phrase containing one is introduced by the
definite article, the verb in the relative clause must be singular: He is
the only one of the students who has (not have) already taken Latin."
/doc/images/en/ContextMenuDirControl.png:
Created updated screenshot. One menu item moved. Slightly cleaner around
the edges.
/doc/images/en/Overlays.png:
Removed dotted line around last filename.
- rworth
Index: source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug.xml
===================================================================
--- source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug.xml (revision 8909)
+++ source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug.xml (working copy)
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
<para>
If you need an introduction to version control with Subversion,
then we recommend you read the fantastic book:
- <ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/">
- <citetitle>Version Control with Subversion</citetitle>
- </ulink>.
+<ulink url="http://svnbook.red-bean.com/">
+<citetitle>Version Control with Subversion</citetitle>
+</ulink>.
</para>
<para>
This document is also a work in progress, just as TortoiseSVN and
@@ -29,6 +29,7 @@
TortoiseSVN in our free time.
</para>
<para>
+ In order to get the most out of the Daily Use Guide:
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
Index: source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug_general.xml
===================================================================
--- source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug_general.xml (revision 8909)
+++ source/en/TortoiseSVN/tsvn_dug/dug_general.xml (working copy)
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
<title>Explorer showing icon overlays</title>
<graphic fileref="../images/Overlays.png"/>
</figure>
- One of the most visible features of TortoiseSVN are the icon
+ One of the most visible features of TortoiseSVN is the icon
overlays which appear on files in your working copy. These
show you at a glance which of your files have been modified.
Refer to <xref linkend="tsvn-dug-wcstatus-1"/> to find out
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