[PATCH] www/build-farm.html, www/variance-adjusted-patching.html

Index: www/build-farm.html
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--- www/build-farm.html (revision 17762)
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 href="https://sourceforge.net/projects/buildbot/">BuildBot</a> for
 build management software, in part because of its <a
 href="http://buildbot.sourceforge.net/manual-0.7.0.html#try">TryScheduler</a>
-feature, which lets a developer to ask the question "What would happen
+feature, which lets a developer ask the question "What would happen
 if I committed this patch right now?". It runs the unit test suite
 (across multiple build platforms) on the developer's current code,
-allowing her to make sure they will not break the tree when she
-finally commits her changes. The default setup, however, is to build
+allowing her to make sure her changes will not break the tree when she
+finally commits them. The default setup, however, is to build
 a repository tree, usually trunk, or a release branch or tag.</p>
 
 <p>BuildBot uses two terms, <b>buildmaster</b> and <b>buildslave</b>,
Index: www/variance-adjusted-patching.html
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 was generated, so that the new patch will be applicable to the new
 target text and yet still have the "same" effect as the old patch. It
 is, in essence, patching a patch. For example, suppose a branch B
-diverges from a trunk T, and in an engineer wants to merge the change
+diverges from a trunk T, and an engineer wants to merge the change
 from revision T:18 to T:19 into B:10, creating B:11. If B:10 is too
 dissimilar to T:18, the merge may fail due to textual conflicts, even
 though there is no logical conflict. Variance adjustment is about
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
 
    <dl>
       <dt><i>insertion</i></dt>
- <dd>A new line, one that has been added in either source or
+ <dd>A new line that has been added in either source or
       target since the common ancestor.</dd>
       <dt><i>deletion</i></dt>
       <dd>A line that has been deleted from either source or target

-- 
Michael Wood <mwood@icts.uct.ac.za>
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