Index: doc/book/misc-docs/directory_versioning.xml =================================================================== --- doc/book/misc-docs/directory_versioning.xml (revision 11255) +++ doc/book/misc-docs/directory_versioning.xml (working copy) @@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ numbers of the same versioned item do not imply different contents. - Nevertheless, the contents of foo.c:4 + Nevertheless, the content of foo.c:4 is still well-defined. The file foo.c in - revision 4 has a specific text and properties. + revision 4 has specific text and properties. Suppose, now, that we extend this concept to directories. If we have a directory DIR, define @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ seems fine in the repository—the repository is very theoretically pure anyway. However, because working copies allow mixed revisions, it's easy to create problematic - use-cases. + use-cases. Index: doc/book/misc-docs/best_practices.xml =================================================================== --- doc/book/misc-docs/best_practices.xml (revision 11255) +++ doc/book/misc-docs/best_practices.xml (working copy) @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ Line Endings - Different platforms (Unix, Windows, MacOS) have different + Different platforms (Unix, Windows, Mac OS) have different conventions for marking the line endings of text files. Simple editors may rewrite line endings, causing problems with diff and merge. This is a subset of the formatting problems. @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ Subversion has built-in support for normalizing line endings. To enable it, set the svn:eol-style property to ``native''. See Properties in the Subversion - book. for more information + book for more information @@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ - You can not easily remove revisions. (There is no + You cannot easily remove revisions. (There is no equivalent to cvs admin -o.) If you might not want something to be in the repository, make sure it is not included in your commit. Check for sensitive Index: doc/book/misc-docs/quick_walkthrough.xml =================================================================== --- doc/book/misc-docs/quick_walkthrough.xml (revision 11255) +++ doc/book/misc-docs/quick_walkthrough.xml (working copy) @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Here's an opportunity to play with Subversion in some hands-on examples. The Subversion commands demoed here are just - small examples of what Subversion can do; see the Chapter 3 in + small examples of what Subversion can do; see Chapter 3 in the Subversion Book for full explanations of each.