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[PATCH] book misc fixes and textual change in Chapter 5

From: Blake Nicholson <svn_at_seraphinandblake.com>
Date: 2004-09-05 00:32:23 CEST

I've made a few grammar fixes to the book. Three of the four changes
are just "tidying up". The other change, in chapter 5, is intended to
make the sentence more clear. I found the use of the word 'full' in
the sentence I modified to be less than ideal in a section discussing
incremental and full backups.

Blake

[[[
Grammar and reference fixes, and also modified some text in the
incremental vs. full backup section of chapter 5 to avoid confusion.

* ch01.xml
   (svn-ch-1-sect-3): Removed extraneous 'a' character.

* ch04.xml
   (svn-ch-4-sect-3.1): Fixed chapter reference for svn diff and svn
merge syntax.

* ch05.xml
   (svn-ch-5-sect-3.6): Changed the text '...full repository dump...' to
   '...complete repository dump...' to avoid any confusion with a full
backup.

* ch08.xml
   (svn-ch-8-sect-1.1): Grammar fix.
]]]

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