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Re: svn commit: r8569 - trunk/doc/book/book

From: C. Michael Pilato <cmpilato_at_collab.net>
Date: 2004-02-06 14:45:44 CET

kfogel@tigris.org writes:

> + <para>In February 2000, they contacted Karl Fogel, the author of a
> + 1999 book on CVS

How about, "the author of _Open Source Development with CVS_ (Coriolis,
1999)" (with the correct markup, of course). The current phrasing is
both awkward and misses a chance to prop your work by name. :-)

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