RE: [PATCH] fix typos in ch07.xml
From: Rusk, Patrick <PRusk_at_wellington.com>
Date: 2004-01-12 18:09:18 CET
>> But I also notice that this patch changes about 20 instances of "which"
e.g.
"The command that backs out changes to files is called "svn revert". This
Note that the "which" phrase could be removed in the second sentence without
Compare the two sentences above with the following:
"The command, which backs out changes to files, is called "svn revert".
That should sound wrong to most ears, or at least odd.
Finally, note the rule alluded to above that "which" phrases are set off by
"The command which backs out changes to files is called "svn revert". This
My apologies to anyone on the list who isn't a native English speaker. I'd
Patrick Rusk
---------------------------------------------------------------------
|
This is an archived mail posted to the Subversion Dev mailing list.
This site is subject to the Apache Privacy Policy and the Apache Public Forum Archive Policy.