Changed lower-case "subversion" to "Subversion" and "ssh" to "SSH";
Minor edits for readability, etc.
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--- ch01.xml (revision 6740)
+++ ch01.xml (working copy)
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
version control system as a sort of <quote>time
machine</quote>.</para>
- <!-- ### something about subversion facilitating communication
+ <!-- ### something about Subversion facilitating communication
between developers?? -->
<para>Some version control systems are also software configuration
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
available under an Apache/BSD-style license which is fully
compliant with the Debian Free Software Guidelines. In other
words, anyone is free to download, modify, and redistribute
- Subversion as he pleases; no permission from CollabNet or
+ Subversion as they please; no permission from CollabNet or
anyone else is required.</para>
</sect1>
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
interoperability, and provides various key features for
free: authentication, authorization, wire compression, and
repository browsing, for example. A smaller, standalone
- svn server process is also available. This server speaks
+ Subversion server process is also available. This server
+ speaks
a custom protocol which can be easily tunneled over ssh.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
<term>Efficient branching and tagging</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- There's no need for branching/tagging to be proportional to
+ There's no need for the cost of branching and tagging to be
+ proportional to
project size. Subversion creates branches and tags by
simply copying the project, using a mechanism similar to a
hard-link. Thus these operations take only a very small,
@@ -212,8 +212,8 @@
on: Windows, Linux, all flavors of BSD, Mac OS X, Netware, and
others. </para>
- <para>The easiest way to get Subversion is to find a binary
- package of some sort for your operating system. Subversion's
+ <para>The easiest way to get Subversion is to download a binary
+ package built for your operating system. Subversion's
website (<systemitem
class="url">http://subversion.tigris.org</systemitem>) often has
binaries available for download, posted by volunteers. The site
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
system, you can use your system's native package-distribution
system (rpm, deb, ports tree) to get Subversion.</para>
- <para>Alternately, you can build Subversion directly from source
+ <para>Alternately, you can build Subversion directly from the
+ source
code. From the website, you can download the latest source-code
release. After unpacking it, follow the instructions in the
INSTALL
file to build it. Note that a released source package contains
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@
<term>svnserve</term>
<listitem>
<para>A standalone server program, runnable as a daemon
- process or invokable by ssh; another way to make your
+ process or invokable by SSH; another way to make your
repository available to others over a network. Discussed
in Chapter 5.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@
<para>Assuming you have Subversion installed correctly, you should
be ready to start. The next two chapters will walk you through
- the usage of the command-line client program. </para>
+ using svn, the command-line client program. </para>
</sect1>
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