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[PATCH] correct usage errors in book preface

From: Mason Thomas <mlt_svn_at_sbcglobal.net>
Date: 2003-03-23 09:39:43 CET

The following patch corrects a couple minor (English) usage errors in
the preface of the book.

Also, the preface refers to "www.svnbook.org" to get recent versions of
the book. Does this domain exist? Will it?

-Mason

log message:
* doc/book/book/ch00.xml: correct minor English usage errors

Index: ch00.xml
===================================================================
--- ch00.xml (revision 5436)
+++ ch00.xml (working copy)
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@
       But like many tools, CVS is starting to show its age.
       Subversion is a relatively new version control system designed
       to be the successor to CVS. The designers set out to win the
- hearts of CVS users in two ways: by creating a open-source
- version control system with a similar design (and "look and
- feel") as CVS, and by attempting to fix most of CVS's noticeable
+ hearts of CVS users in two ways: by creating an open-source
+ version control system with a design (and "look and feel")
+ similar to CVS, and by attempting to fix most of CVS's noticeable
       flaws. While the result isn't necessarily the next great
       evolution in version control design, Subversion
       <emphasis>is</emphasis> very powerful, very useable, and very

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