Re: Buglet in book

On Fri, Dec 13, 2002 at 03:01:36PM +0100, Andreas J. Koenig wrote:
> Native English speaker will have a better fix ready, I can only say
> that the sentence seems broken.
>
>
> * book/ch03.xml: Correct broken sentence
>
> Index: book/ch03.xml
> ===================================================================
> --- book/ch03.xml (revision 4076)
> +++ book/ch03.xml (working copy)
> @@ -1137,7 +1137,7 @@
> <term><filename>filename.*.rOLDREV</filename></term>
> <listitem>
> <para>This is the file that was the BASE revision
> - before you updated your working copy. That is, it
> + before you updated your working copy. That is
> the file that you checked out before you made your
> latest edits.</para>
> </listitem>

I would leave the comma there and simply remove the word "it".

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Colin Watson                                  [cjwatson@flatline.org.uk]
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